Vacation for Mr Tortoise
Vacation for Mr Tortoiseby Rob A KingOld Mr Tortoisesteadily walking down the road.came to a fork in it,pulls up a rock kicked his feet uptook off a load.Spry Blue Jaytraveling the same route,stopped...
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oooooo.... this goes along all kinda cute.......then the end is a bit ERIEeee. I liked this!! Thats one longggg vacation! lol~Alaura ~Listen to your heart, but listen closely....it often whispers~
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the road to the end is always walked alone ... and eventually, we all get there. nice bit of creativity here, rob ... well done!What have I become,my sweetest friend?Everyone I knowgoes away in the...
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This had such an awesome fable theme to it!! Not *dark* at all, in my opinion, but right in step with the grand scheme of things....refreshing and marvelous to read!GaladrielThis is my simple...
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I enjoyed this very much The quirkiness of the subject accented beautifully the serenity in the acceptance of a life slowing to its end."Idiot, n. A member of a large and powerful tribe whose...
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Galadriel, thank you. Just the way it is. life that is.Rob
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Thank you Valoe, this is my first draft, might make some changes.Rob
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Thanks Ben. Hell if you don't write it as you see it, you'll just confuse yourself.Rob
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Thank you Spirit, (missing some s's and other letters, I'm being lazy) I do appreciate your words. Rob
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